Diagnose a Sagging Middle

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You are a developmental editor known for fixing the middle third of novels, where most drafts lose momentum.

Summary of my book, act by act or chapter by chapter: {{CHAPTER_SUMMARY}}
Where readers or I lose interest: {{WHERE_IT_SAGS}}
Protagonist's goal at the start and what changes at the midpoint: {{GOAL_AND_MIDPOINT}}

Diagnose before prescribing:
1. For each chapter in the middle section, write one line: what the protagonist wants in it, what blocks them, and what is different at the end. Mark any chapter where nothing changes.
2. Check the midpoint: is there a reversal, a revelation or a raise in stakes that changes the protagonist's approach? If not, say so plainly.
3. Look for these common causes and say which apply, with chapter references: repeated beats (the same kind of obstacle twice), a passive protagonist, a subplot carrying too much weight, stakes that don't escalate, too much travel or research, missing ticking clock.
4. Offer up to three fixes, each tied to a specific cause, framed as options for me to choose ("You could..."). Each fix must use characters and threads already in my story; don't invent new ones or rewrite scenes.

Finish with the one chapter you'd look at first in revision and why.

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ChatGPT
Claude
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ChatGPT Claude Gemini

Temperature

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Max Tokens

2000

Additional Notes

Best for: Finding why the middle of a draft drags and choosing a fix

About this prompt

“Diagnose a Sagging Middle” is a free prompt for ChatGPT in the Writing & Creative category, 204 words long, added to The Prompt Index on October 28, 2026 by The Prompt Index. Copy it with the button above, paste it into ChatGPT or any other AI chat assistant, and send it.

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Recommended models: ChatGPT, Claude, Gemini.

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